Not bad
Your going to want to make the people fade out when they pass through a door, like it does in most games, and make a blue box around the text or something like it does in final fantasy, and if you could (It'd take a lot of time but would look nice) make the text scroll out like it does in most games.
Another fancy trick I just learned, increase the FPS (Frames per second) of your movies. (to do it, just go into Modify and than Click document. In the window that appears, change the frame rate to something higher. 18 is pretty good, 24 works to unless you've got a lot of animation, where the program might crash. If you do this to an existing movie, the speed of everything will increase and be off-key, but you can work to fix it if you want. It's best to just do it from the start or not at all).
On a side note, stop insulting people who give you bad reviews, if they're idiots, let them be idiots. Anyone who has children knows that shouting at them doesn't usually help in the long run. Besides, you know your better than them anyway right?
keep up the work.