I know you said it's supposed to look butch, but... I really think it should be toned a bit. I like the art though. Make the eyes softer and have less thick of eyelashes. Most femenine game characters have eyes that are really nice, which makes them memorable.
Psychofig
I know you said it's supposed to look butch, but... I really think it should be toned a bit. I like the art though. Make the eyes softer and have less thick of eyelashes. Most femenine game characters have eyes that are really nice, which makes them memorable.